manga girl

The face and perspective are well done, but I would like to point out a few things: you should take care when shadowing a drawing with pencil, the strokes can't be noticed, and here is one thing that that I can notice without looking for them. Also you have to work on the greyscale, but don't worry about that, like everything is practise. and the last thign I would like to point out, is that you should try inking drawings like this, as they will look cleaner.